First Time

I'm a bit tipsy. Thought I'd try out writing a tiny thing of Nick and Judy's first time. 😏 I don't write a lot. For maaaaany reasons. My vocabulary isn't great along with other things. Be easy, please! I have no idea what I'm doing. Sorry for flaws. 😅


"Are you scared?"
"..." Judy didn't say anything. Her ears fell slightly, hovering a bit. Her wide illuminating eyes blinked in the dim moonlight that strewn across the sheets of the bed from the window. It was quiet. He heard her shallow breathing and the thudding beat of her heart. She was nervous. Of course. But so was he. No doubt about it. She carefully crawled toward him on all fours. Her lips parted a bit, small breaths escaping through. He spread his knees wider letting the bunny gain access as she inched towards him. Her paw brushed against his thigh as she made her way up his long body. She stopped when her nose was a few inches from his muzzle. His nose twitched as he smelt her powerful scent. She leaned over his body, a tiny tremble running down her back. Her fur rose. She could feel the the heat rise from her cheeks.
"Are you sure you want to?" He went on. His eyes were locked on hers. He sat there motionless, waiting for her.
He heard her swallow.
"I do." She said quietly. "Do you?"
He nodded slowly, his eyebrows furrowed together. He wanted to touch her. But he waited...
She gently rested her bottom atop of his lower torso and straightened her back. Her amethyst eyes glued to his emerald gems, she shakily grabbed the length of her shirt and raised it up over her furry belly in a quick tug. He reached for her then. His fingerpads brushing against her thick fur. He stroked the velvet up to her breast as she raised the shirt up and over her head. She trembled again as his paws grabbed a thick tuft of her softly. This time more than the first. Shivered all the way to her legs that straddled him. He felt it. She let out a tiny sigh. She couldn't help but grabbing his paw after she tossed the shirt to the side as he tried sliding it up to grasp her neck. She was so small to him. She closed her eyes and stroked the length of his arm that carrassed the fur around her collar. His thumb traced the fur of her throat lightly. Then slowly fell, his claws brushing against her as he made his way down her waist.
"You are so beautiful...I'll never leave you, you know..., my precious little bunny."
Her eyes fluttered open. The look on his admiring face was enough to make her want to cry with joy.

K. That's it for now I suppose. Too tired to do any more. Needs more detail. Tad boring. Its definitely not "good" and its pretty short. Haha. But anywaaaaay, Criticism is welcome. Tell me what to do here. 😁
But right now, I shall sleep. Ugh. So sleepy.